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-THE SUBSPACE- by ArtyTank -THE SUBSPACE- :iconartytank:ArtyTank 59 9
So, for those following me because of Smash World, I'm saying this right now, I will be restarting it from scratch. Why?
The story, while okay for episodic, was incredibly disjointed as an overall, with poor pacing and action scenes slapdash together without establishing much. And yes, I realize, that you don't need that much establishment for preexisting franchises, but even in story you need reason to care, particularly since allot of the characters in Smash Bros are blank slates, and the "I played as this character, and therefore I somehow give a darn about them" thought process can only get you so far.
I will point out I did start the entire thing as just jokey vignettes, and I don't want to do that anymore. Save those for shorts. Also, I noticed the art was pretty terrible, particularly on Tumblr.
So this is my long winded explanation saying Smash World is post poned at the moment. Sorry.
Also, I want to figure out a better for Smash World.
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